RikoKiaririnkakinta's art Reviews on Newgrounds

["SuperSpellHeroes" - Ancient Egyptian Jane Design Art (Final)]

the egyptian theme is a nice pick you've got there! the shading and coloring is ON POINT! the linework is impressive considering its done by a mouse. and the palette you choose for your entry is interesting .but it didn't immediately grab my attention .the design itself is well put together but it seems it could be improved even further. (that's just my opinion ) good luck in the contest ^^

GingerMing responds:

Yes! Someone did suggest to me that one thing I should do immediately for my next artwork is to have 3 different tone colours, so their is a depth to the character. After that, I'll work on 4 tones, and so on...
Talking about grabbing your attention. perhaps it's the colours I used "White, Red, Yellow" But should have a spectrum. For example, light red- red- dark red. light yellow, yellow, dark yellow.
Thank you for your suggestion! and I really appreciate the compliment. :D

OH WAIT! OH MANNN! Maybe I should have a golden snake, having it's mouth bite the yellow crystal, that would have stand out!